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Edmund Vonox's avatar

Wow very well written, your style is very easy to read and the words flow like water making the visualization appear naturally. Only suggestion I have is to go more in depth with your world building techniques; ie, the setting/kingdom they're in as well as explaining more about these students and scientists which seems to play a nuanced roll in the story.

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Nicole Paton's avatar

This is a very compelling world! I am very much looking forward to chapter 2. She seemed very snooty, but good god, that poor woman!

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